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The Roses Bleed

15 Sunday Oct 2023

Posted by Su Layug in Filipino, Micropoetry, Poetry Translation, Tagalog, Twitter Poetry

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Autumn, Filipino, Filipino translation, poem, Poetry, Tagalog, Tagalog translation, Visual Art

(in English and Tagalog)

The Twitter poetry tradition goes back to when the then-Twitter (now X) platform posed a challenge to poets to write within its restrictive 140 characters, to when the character count expanded to 280, and to now, when the longer form is allowed for premium subscribers.

I continue to write in the restrictive form of 280 characters or less, being used to delivering poetic thoughts in bursts of Tweets, albeit they are no longer called that.

As a Tagalog translator, I (human) also translate my English tweets to this Philippine language, constantly comparing it to the renditions of Google Translate or Bing Translate, which are readily available on The X platform, itself. The evolution of AI in translation is part of my self-study as a translator and as a poet.

“Rose Gardens” (mixed media on watercolor paper) by ThompsonNFT on Twitter / X with the author’s permission https://twitter.com/thompsonNFT/status/1713194138869387659/photo/1

The Roses Bleed 

onto the page of autumn
where bleeding is allowed
with abandon
in grief, in passion, in remorse --
or to let stand still
what briefly was or what could've been
in a tiny light --
that it may perchance, shine --
another time. Again.

~ Su Layug
Nagdurugo Ang Mga Rosas

sa pahina ng taglagas
kung saan hinahayaan ang pagdugo
nang walang pakundangan
nang dahil sa dalamhati, pusok, pagtitika --
o upang patirikin lamang
ang isang saglit, o ang isa sanang saglit --
nang harinawa'y, 
isang araw
ito'y muling magningning.

~ Su Layug

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Filipino translation: “Water Lantern Festival”

06 Wednesday Sep 2023

Posted by Su Layug in creative writing, Filipino, Poetry Translation

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Autumn, death, Filipino translation, Love, Poetry, Tagalog translation

Human poetry overlaid on AI-generated visual (Midjourney)

Pista ng Mga Lampara sa Tubig

Paalam, Tag-init – ikaw
na isinulat ko sa mga dingding
ng lamparang papel, hanggang pumanaog ang mga salita
sa daloy na hindi na/kayang
bigkasin ang ngalan mo, ang iyong mukha/ng --
suminag sa langit at tubig. mga piraso
ng pagkatao ko – isang hardin
na lumago at huminga/inihinga
nang walang pag-aalala o alinlangan/iniwan
habang pinaliliyab ang sandaling
padapithapon.

translated to Tagalog/Filipino by Su Layug

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Filipino / Tagalog translation: “November for Beginners” by Rita Dove

17 Saturday Sep 2022

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Autumn, English-Tagalog Translation, Poetry

“November” (photo by Su Layug)
(excerpt) 

So we wait, breeding
mood, making music
of decline. We sit down
in the smell of the past
and rise in a light
that is already leaving.
We ache in secret,
Memorizing

(Tagalog translation by Su Layug)

Kaya naghihintay tayo, nag-uudyok
ng damdamin, lumilikha ng tugtog
ng pagtumal. Inuupuan natin
ang paglanghap ng nakaraan
at umaahon sa liwanag
na payao na.
Lihim tayong kumikirot,
Nagsasaulo

Read the whole poem in English here: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/55630/november-for-beginners-56d2376810b48

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Why I love the Dead Red Leaf by Su Layug (a prose-poem translated to Filipino)

02 Saturday Nov 2013

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arugula, aspen, Autumn, death, English to Filipino, English to Tagalog, Filipino prose poem, Filipino translation, leaves, life, red oak leaf, seasons, Tagalog prose poem

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Copyright © 2013 Su Layug. All Rights Reserved.*

Kung Bakit Gusto Ko ang Patay na Dahong Pula (pagsasalin ng hango) ~ ni Su Layug

Ang Aspen, gamit ang pulido nitong tangkay,  ay ang prima donna ng sayaw na ito. Kahit na bago pa dumating ang pagwawalis ng bagyo, itinatago nito ang kaniyang mukha, tumatalikod upang ihantad ang pinilakang gulugod, na wari’y nagsasabi kay Kamatayan: wala akong nalalabing maibibigay sa iyo,.  Simutin mo man ang buhay kong maputla, kakapit at kakapit pa rin ako bilang kalansay sa aking Puno, sa aking Tadhana.  Sa kalaunang pagkahulog, minumulto ng Aspen ang mga yapakan ng kagubatan. Hindi lang ito basta nakatingala mula sa lupa. Makanti lamang ng hangin, umiiling ito na parang nagsasabi: “Hindi, hindi, hindi!” Wari’y hindi nito matanto o matanggap ang pagkawalang-saysay ng kaniyang tunggali. Ang Don Quixote ng kaharian ng mga dahon, sinasabak ng dahon ng Aspen ang apat na patalim ng windmill ng pagpapalit ng panahon. Ang dahon ng Aspen ay isang kaluluwang pampurgatoryo.

Why I Love the Dead Red Leaf (excerpt) ~ by Su Layug

The Aspen, with its dexterous petiole is the prima donna of this dance. Even before the purge by thunderstorms, it hides its face, shows its silvery back, as though to say to Death: I have nothing left for you to take. Scrape me of my pallid life, I will still cling as skeleton to my Tree, my Destiny. The Aspen leaf, eventually fallen, haunts the forest footpaths. It doesn’t just lie there. At the slightest touch of wind, its body quivers so, “No, no, no!” It doesn’t seem to realize nor accept the futility of its struggle. The Don Quixote of the foliage kingdom,the Aspen leaf fights the four-bladed windmill that is the turning of the season. The Aspen leaf is a purgatory soul.

The whole prose-poem can be read here: https://medium.com/no-category-for-this/bad76a37eb71

*reblogging/linking, as usual practice, is encouraged and permitted. If you have questions, you’re welcome to email or comment right below the title of the post. Thank you.

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Naaalala Kita, Kung Paano Ka Noon ~ ni Pablo Neruda (salin mula sa Ingles ni Su Layug — na salin ni M.S. Merwin — at Kastila)

18 Thursday Apr 2013

Posted by Su Layug in Poetry Translation

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Tags

Autumn, Fall, Filipino translation, Flame, Love, Memory, Merwin, Neruda, Poetry, Remembering, Tagalog translation, Twilight

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Naaalala kita, kung paano ka noong nakaraang taglagas.


Ikaw yung beret na abuhin at ang pusong mahinahon.


Sa mga mata mo, pilit na nagtatalo ang lagablab ng dapit-hapon.


At naglaglagan ang mga dahon sa tubig ng iyong kaluluwa


Nakakapit sa mga braso ko, animo’y gumagapang na halaman


Tinitipon ng mga dahon ang tinig mong malumanay.


Apoy ng pagkamangha, nagtutupok sa uhaw ko.


Hayasinta* —  bughaw, matamis na pulupot sa aking kaluluwa


Nadarama kong naglalakbay ang mga mata mo, lumipas na ang taglagas:


Abuhing beret, tinig ng ibon, tahanang puso,


Kung saan dumayo ang aking mga buntung-hininga


at ang aking mga halik, nagsilaglagan, maliliksing mga baga


Langit na dumaong. Patag ng bulubundok:


Ang alaala mo ay binubuo ng liwanag, ng usok, ng lawang walang-tinag!


Sa dako pa, lagpas sa iyong mga mata, lumalagablab ang takipsilim.


Mga tuyong dahon ng taglagas umiinog sa iyong kaluluwa.

*Hyasinta — nilikhang salita, paglalaro sa salitang “hyacinth” at “sinta”

 

 

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